Vietnam trip, the most valuable time of my life.
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Who : I and my friends
What : Studied at Vietnam
When : 2 months ago
Where : FPT international university, Danang
How : I got the Vietnamese scholarship.
It's my first time of going aboard by plane.
I and my friends learnt and live together.
We learnt about many things.
We did many activities together.
We were like a big family.
How did the story end? :
I still miss that moment when I stayed at Vietnam with my friends.
Story
I’m
always happy and merry when I think about the moment that I stayed and did many
activities with my friends at Vietnam. Two months ago, I had an opportunity to
get Vietnamese scholarship for learning English language and Vietnamese culture
there. Especially, this’s my first time that I went aboard by plane and I was very
excited because going by the plane is my highest dream. I and my friends stayed
and studied at FPT international university, Danang. At that place, we didn’t only just learn about English language and Vietnamese culture but we also
learnt about how to live with friends and foreigners happily because we came
from different family. However, we could live together because we tried to
understand each other and weren’t serious about the bad things. Besides, we also traveled to many places for
doing a lot of activities for instance, doing the photo-model contest at Lueng
Stream, going shopping at Vincom Plaza, travelling at Hoi-An etc. Living at FPT
university was like we were the big family because we always helped each other when there’s someone had problems and after that, we solved them together. Even
though, the time has passed for 2 months but I am still happy and merry when I
think about the things that I and my friends did together. I can confidently
say that this is the great moment of my life.
Sittichai Meepiwhom Sec.58/10 Student No. 584102026
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