Thrilled Pokemon GO
Yesterday, my friends and I had an exciting moment
playing Pokemon GO in Sanam Chandra Palace. Around 3.30 p.m., My friends and I
decided to go to Sanam Chandra Palace for playing Pokemon GO because there’re
many kinds of Pokemon there. When we reached there, we didn’t wait for
anything, we started our mission. But when we entered the gate, the security
guards told us that “Playing Pokemon GO is not allowed here”, so, that shocked
us because we came here to play it. However, we still continued our mission.
When I was playing, I had to look around and beware of the guards who were
checking around. It seemed like we were robbers who tried to steal something.
After that, when we noticed that there’s a guard was staring to us, hence, we pretended
to walk and look around like we were just the people who came here for taking a
sight around Sanam Chandra Palace. That’s very excited and thrilled. After we
got many kinds of Pokemon, we went back to our dormitory. I confidently say
that this is the most excited and thrilled moment ever.
Sittichai Meepiwhom Sec.58/10 584102026
You don't split an introduction and conclusion again. I'll give you 7 points.
ReplyDeleteEven this paragraph is so long, I still like it. Because you wrote the introduction very good and the conclusion is similar the introduction. I give u 9.5 points.
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ReplyDeleteYour paragraph is great. But you don't have introduction. I'll give you 8 point.
ReplyDeleteI can remember that moment! Anyway, your introduction is great. I'll give you 9 points.
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