THE
GREATEST FATHER AND SON EVER
This is the picture of Max
and Simon, father and son that they were taken last month, on Christmas day.
The right side of the
picture is the father, Max wearing a grey-blue t-shirt is a smart man with oval
face, short curly blonde hair, black eyes and tan skin. He is very generous
because he always helps people doing things for instance, watching over
neighbor's house and cleaning the yard. And he also has a great sense of humor,
he always plays a joke and makes others laugh. However, he's very sensitive
because if there's a thing makes him uncomfortable, he's easy to cry. He's a
strong man but also weak at the same time.
The left side of this picture is his
son, Simon wearing white T-shirt it's very cute with oval face long straight dark brown
hair, black eyes, freckled face and white skin. Simon and his father are quite
different for instance, their hair and their skin. He's very punctual because
he is always on time in every situation for example, he never goes to school
late and goes meeting late. However, he is forgetful person, he always forgets
the place that he places things or stuffs and he also forgets his friends'
name.
Even these two people have
both positive points and also have negative points, they're still beloved of
the people in their town because they always help people in the town and also do things for society.
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