My
Favorite Place.
In our life, it’s right that everyone has to have
the favorite place that he or she can relax or feel comfortable. It can be a
famous place like waterfall, beach, funny park etc. However, for me, I think
that my favorite place is my dorm where I stayed when I studied at Ratchbhat
Nakhon Pathom University.
I always think of my room located in Thanwarat
dormitory, next to Nakhon Pathom Rachabhat University. I lived in this dorm two
years ago before I went out for work. I had both good and bad memories here but
when I thought of it I still missed this place. When I stayed in my dorm, I
could get more energy by absorbing everything around my room because the
atmosphere was perfect. I saw the pillows, a bolster and a blanket which I used
to pillow, hug and cover arranged orderly on my bed. I heard the sound of the
birds singing melodiously and wind-blow sound going through the window and
making me feel comfortable. In addition, I smelt the scent of my room having
the smell of food eaten every day and my clothes at the porch washed by myself.
Moreover, I tasted the water I bought every night and the food I bought every
morning. And the last one, I touched the floor by lying on it. It was very cold
and could treat me when I was exhausted from things outside.
This was not just only the dorm that lived for
eating, sleeping, playing, or doing many activities but it was like my safe
zone that I could rest and relax and don’t be afraid of anything because
there’s nothing could harm me when I was in my dorm. I miss it.
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